Score: 7

"its ok"

submission: South Side School Ep 1

date: October 16, 2007

this is ok its, not really funny though

Score: 9

"funny"

submission: Bowser's Kingdom: Eps 1

date: October 15, 2007

this is so funny but the titale's wrong if its bowers kingdom and only sitting around the koopa and goomba shouldn't it be called "the koopa and goomba stories ep 1" or something like that.

Score: 10

"whoa"

submission: Bowser's Kingdom: Eps 2

date: October 15, 2007

this is just funny but if the shy guys caught on fire wouldn't that make them flame guys? like from paper mario it just makes sense

Score: 9

"nice"

submission: Yes or No - TV Show

date: October 15, 2007

this rocks it has a timer and it makes you think quickly a better thing 2 upgrade it though it maybe add a few more seconds to the timer cause its like i press play it gives a random picture and random question. and the first thing you think is wtf? anyways its awesome

Score: 10

"nice game"

submission: Stabika ep.2: Carnage

date: October 14, 2007

this game rocks and the survival mode is great its kinda addicting its pretty cool for yor next 1 why not put in a 2 player mode or a chaos mode maybe a multi chaos that would rock even more

Score: 6

"hmm"

submission: School For Cacti

date: October 11, 2007

this was yor first submission right? well its yor best but it can b way better try looking at the tutorials on the newgrounds tut page it will really help and all of yor submissions look mostly like slideshows u should spend alot more time on them they will get a million times better and i hope on yor next submission u get a bigger score good luck ( sorry for any k's after the r's my keybord is broken lol)

Score: 4

"err"

submission: Moogle's Quest for Fries

date: October 11, 2007

b4 u make another flash i would suggest looking at many of the authors on newgrounds and also if u dont have much time 2 get sprites use some of the time u spend flash animating it would work and i really hated on the way u responded on the 1 review u really could actually use the information u r given 2 become a better animator instead of mouthing off every1 giving u a helpful tip so its your choice 2 b a winner or a loser (no offense)

Score: 3

"its not good"

submission: Superman VS Vageta

date: October 11, 2007

first of all u need 2 make it longer put in a chat or something then they fight and vegeta is spelt with 2 e's and then after numeral hard hits vegeta would go super saiyan u only made it look like both superman and dbz look like garbage (no offense) and it makes u look lazy

Score: 7

"kool"

submission: The Bloody Mary Tale

date: October 11, 2007

this was kinda creepy like his voice mostly (the creepy that doesn't creep u out but also doesn't keep u calm its like the whats gonna happen if u r 8 years old and then u no whats gonna happen for 10+) so i kinda like it so 7/10

Score: 5

"this is ok"

submission: Mario Indiana Jones

date: October 10, 2007

it just needs 2 b longer and maybe more characters after that it could probable hav a score of 3.5 to 4 anyways this was ok